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mga sir pakitadtad naman ng comments. kailangan ko na to mafinalize this week. hirap ako magdecide ng theme. saudi project po ito. salamat po. yun immediate boss ko magaling magrender ng free hand kaya pati mga bato ng shadow ng sun at yun reaction ng kulay pinapaayos niya. salamat po.

Saturation> exposure> textures and camera range, adjustments.

saan po yan sa max po?

pasensya na po baguhan lang sa max.

Repetitive trees on the left side, geometry problem (or something else) on the lower right side, lack of foreground elements on the left side, you could probably put more focus on the building and zoom a bit the camera.

And then do some heavy color correction in photoshop, the render looks too warm and saturated.

goodluck bro!

salamat po sa inputs sir =) ok try ko po subukan yun suggestions niyo. hinde ko mazoom yun camera kase yun boss ko gusto yun overall feel. malake yun sky at foreground yun rule of thirds daw. kaya malayo yun camera ko. saudi po kase yun project kaya hinahabol ko yun mainit na feel. baka po may inputs kayo papaano makuha yun. salamat po.

sleepzawake wrote:salamat po sa inputs sir =) ok try ko po subukan yun suggestions niyo. hinde ko mazoom yun camera kase yun boss ko gusto yun overall feel. malake yun sky at foreground yun rule of thirds daw. kaya malayo yun camera ko. saudi po kase yun project kaya hinahabol ko yun mainit na feel. baka po may inputs kayo papaano makuha yun. salamat po.

You can still achieve the basic rule of thirds even if you move your camera. For example, in the render, you are standing on the road. You could move your camera towards the left side so you're standing on the sidewalk, therefore giving you the chance to introduce some bushes and plants on the foreground.

And when i said "your render is too warm" i meant COLOR, not temperature. Your render is too yellow. You can balance out the colors by using Color Balance in Photoshop.

This is what I'm talking about. Compare the two images. Try to experiment with Color Balance, Selective Color and Saturation. Goodluck!

magaling!!! yan ba yun gawa mo??? ok sir dame layers papano ba yan?

sige try ko po mamaya. salamat madame.

try mo ito sa photoshop sir, punta ka sa image/adjustment/photo filter/filter/cooling filter 80 or try mo lahat para makita mo anong gusto mo, then adjust ka nalang ng brightness/contrast

salamat sa inputs sir =)